Wednesday, 16 May 2012

Crit feedback


Feedback

Strengths

Product, range and proposal
  1. Large product range
  2. Large number of products


Design Development

  1. Colour schemes will work well with foundations
  2. More boards and explanation


Visual Quality
  1. Looking at this, to me it looks although its aimed at young girls being introduced to make up - this is down to type and colours


Weaknesses

  1. Product range and proposal
  2. Promotional material / instore presentation

Design Development
  1. Have you looked at benefit, they have similar product design
  2. Black and white works better

Visual Quality

  1. To busy
  2. Constructed - typo
  3. No visual Leirary

Production Values

  1. Spell check


ACTION PLAN

Explore using black and white
Start Creating boards
Mock up packaging
Design campaign material
Design publication / leaflet

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