Comments made:
- Make the message clearer "It's ok to have some luxury brands.."
- Make it subject related "Save on these things because graphic design course is a lot to fund."
- Less condom, it's too prude
- More intricate detail, less words
- Think about colour
- Think about dealing with three different categorises - Health, course and back home.
- Possibly create three different stop motions dealing with the different categories.
Action to take:
- Write some more things to say within my stop motion, thinking about making it clear that the saving hints made, are so you can afford the luxury items on the course, since it's quite an expensive course to undertake.
- Research what luxury graphic design related items peers save money for.
- Start illustrating these items.
- Give more detail to typography, less writing.
- Perhaps change the condom aspect element to be less prude.
- Research colour - Perhaps relating to graphic design course, eg. White and Silver - Macbooks
- Think about how I could categorise the elements of the stop motion.
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