It was stated that within my blogs I should produce more documents in scrib and Issuu format, but otherwise annotation is good. The organisation of the blogs needed to be improved with less labels.
The content of the boards was good but some images were blurred, but most of high quality. Not so much text is needed, images speak for themselves. The layout is good, but bullet points for some areas would be good.
Increase the leading of the text, and use different weights for body and titles. Avoid outlines around images.
Shop mock ups look good. Could use more evaluation within blog posts. Good visual development. Organise blog by clearer labels.
Boards - Website images would look better on a mac screen. Increase the leading and number the boards.
A lot of development just remember to annotate; annotation could be better.
For boards try and create a type hierarchy
Some photos blurry
Number boards
Overall a lot of compliments were made about each of my products I had created, the quality. was a main point which was good.
Casa Mia menus - lamination is naff, try using a waterproof stock
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