Using information found about each of the species of birds, I decided to insert this information beside each of the windows, forcing a reader, to read about the bird before viewing it.
Another change I have made is the red lines I had used previously, they didn't really work in filling up the negative space, instead the writing, I feel does the trick.
One possibility was to reveal the information with the birds behind the window, but I found there wasn't enough space to do so, and I didn't want to make the image smaller to accommodate the writing as fine detail couldn't be seen.
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